[BC1967]

Worked some more on this. Would really like some feedback on the image.

http://rendermonitor.no-ip.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=57

(newest image is at the bottom)

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[acidcrys]

i think it looks awesome
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[BC1967]

Thanks acidcrys.
There's yet another version at the bottom of the linked page.
I'm curious to hear thoughts on the plume of heavy black smoke on the left.
My iontent in putting it there was to try to convey the idea that this place is not a pleasent place. I plan to put figures ( slaves ) in the foreground and back through the mines in the middle ground.
I think on many levels the piece is also a reaction to war in the Mid East.
And thanks ahead for taking the time to make the link ( big downlod ), but worth it I hope.


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[acidcrys]

I would suggest making it a bit more sporadic in its flowing upwards ( I hope you understand what I mean) .. and add some more into the background seen.. then I think it would look just great and it does add the feel that you're implying - adding slaves sounds cool
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