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Hunago · Posted: Sun Feb 23, 2003 10:34 pm

Hi, I have finished the myth battle pic, thanks to pritch and the clan oth's help in WIP. Here it is:

full size (220k)

I think the overall composition and tonal value could still be better, if someone would do a overpaint I'd really appreciate it.
Crits and advices are welcome too!

Hunago · Posted: Wed Feb 26, 2003 8:14 pm

sorry for bumping this.

I am really in need for some feedback and critiques, please?

Matt Ryan · Posted: Thu Feb 27, 2003 1:02 am

i dont see why this hasnt gotten any replies, this is a great piece. your compositon works well, although pegasus seems to be in the center of the pic. maybe having him less front and center would help. your use of diagonals work well. some of the rendering seems uncompleted, as if you could squeeze in some more detail. good work tho
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Xyster21 · Posted: Thu Feb 27, 2003 1:43 am

That 1st head of the creature on the left is looking outward and over the pegasus... it's just me but it throws me off a little. Maybe having him looking P would make it come together more. When I first looked at it I was confused a little by what it was but maybe he is peering off at the spirits/gods etc in the clouds. Smile

Just an opinion from another point of view.
But besides that this picture is very very nice!
Great work n keep posting Smile

*skips back into the wip to take a look*
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Hunago · Posted: Thu Feb 27, 2003 10:57 pm

thanks!
I agree the pegasus is too centred. Since everything is in one layer, I dunno how to move the pegasus back cleanly, maybe I should lengthen canvas' aspect ratio... this would give the Hydras and Colossi more breathing space too. pic does feel cramped at the moment.

also agree about the left hydra head, I'll try to change its angle to something more menancing.

your suggestions are really helpful, thanks guys! Smile