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bengal · Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 8:29 am

here is a piece that took me more time (of course because of the background). i am not absolutely happy with the balance of colours all around the robot, but i was afraid spending more time would kill the job already done... anyway, here :

this time, if you people want to have a try to fix problems in this piece, feel free to show me how! :)
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zap.br · Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 8:52 am

hi .. so ..
i take a look and i think the wall behind the robot and girl
have a little mistake in perspectives .. like i show here :

i think fix it the image can be much much better
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tek9z · Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 9:11 am

picky picky picky
who cares about the perspective man!
u probably drew this directly in painter , right bengal?
anyway, it looks the best!!
together with 'this way buddha' this is my favorite piece!
more of these plz Very Happy

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AndyT · Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 9:26 am

It's great! Stunning! Cooool!

Doesn't that look like 3 point perspective!?
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osku - - - · Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 3:25 pm

The perspective seems fine to me. Well, maybe the ladders are a bit aslant if you compare to the space-grid over them. Other than that great draw and colors. Liked the fadin in the colors over the distance.
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mellowsmoothe · Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 4:31 pm

bengal...dont fix the perspective...its fine. if there are perspective issues they are minimal and insignificant. getting back to what you asked about color balance, i think, if we are on the same page, that your contrast is in the right place. i think that she works well as being the warmest color, except that the orange board on the right competes a bit with her. i would tone it down a bit over there, and maybe make the pit on the right, where the ladder goes down into, a darker color maybe one of those nice dirty aquas you use so well. maybe even a light down there, but not enough to detract focus from her or the robot...low contrast. anyway i hope i answered your question. great job, and you have a fun website to go to!

aColdOldKodiak · Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 5:26 pm

wow... awsome piece. Only thing I really see is that her outstretched arm looks a lil long. VEry nice
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Francis · Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 8:46 pm

waaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! Very Happy

too cool man, I love this one..
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eyewoo · Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 9:06 pm

The perspective...???? It's fine. Not a problem!!!

Another wonderfuL Bengal...
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Tomasis · Posted: Tue Feb 25, 2003 3:30 am

very wonderful work

you have more capacities than I believed

continue work hard GL

gezstar · Posted: Tue Feb 25, 2003 9:49 pm

This is by far my favorite one from you... it's also the least Terada-esque, I find - the woman's character design is somehow really original. I enjoyed it a lot, I hope you make more of these slightly more time-consuming pictures Smile

bengal · Posted: Wed Feb 26, 2003 2:25 am

gezstar>> ... as soon as i have time to consume, no problem!! ;)

tomasis>> glad to read i can be succesful sometime! thx!! :)

all>> i do think the perspective is correct. i didn't have problems with it ; it is about the general balance of colors, somehow i didn't manage to have control over every slightest detail ; which means i still need a lot of training on bigger pieces! :) i have another one coming, i'll try to have it for the middle of the next week.
thank you people!! :) i get a lot of motivation when getting your comments!
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