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tom!
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 Posted: Mon Feb 17, 2003 10:14 pm |
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Hi all ^^
I started sketching (w/ink and markers), and I came up with this, then I was like hey thats a pretty cool concept, and I've never done something like this before...(even though I'm pretty sure alot of people have -o-; )
I've also never coloured any anime type stuff without black border lines ^^
(I'm liking this method alot better though, cause its more challenging and funn)
anyway after 10 mins of working on it, I realized that I could use this for something.. so now I want to make it look good...
so I ask for your suggestions critiques and bashings....(cause your all so good)
I'm not very good at ass-ish areas... so am I doing the right thing down there? (even though that parts not started you can see the out lines of it....)
anyway any thing you can tell me to improve on would be very appreciated ...
thanks..
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tom!
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| Posted: Mon Feb 17, 2003 10:16 pm |
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w00t
I just noticed that it looks like she has an adams apple....I'd better fix that ^^
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Pelax
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| Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2003 4:15 am |
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You have to improve a loton that picture of Yours
Pay a visit to http://www.cafesale.net and
there look at Master Bengal gallery and links..
It's the best reference...
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| Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2003 9:46 am |
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| best reference is from life, fanboy. |
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Pelax
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| Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2003 2:09 pm |
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Ok.. that's right!
But where to find a kicking girl when You're a gentleman?? 
And the picture here is quite a difficult one..
Maybe http://fineart.sk could help?? tips about MANGA.. and girl's neck 
Check out the anatomy section
Don't worry - girls have that Adam's thing - the problem is it shouldn't be visible
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tom!
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| Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2003 9:20 pm |
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uhh thanks guys... ^^
how about this .. so far...
looking good?
should I add/change/erase anything?
anything looking crappy in it?
I'm abit shaky with the pants right now...
the shading isn't very good... and I'm realy not good at folds...(you guys got any tips?)
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| Posted: Thu Feb 20, 2003 9:02 am |
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Hey great tom you drew a girl! ^_-
I gotta go with egerie on this one... use a photo! Don't forget Google. Check this...
http://www.empiregym.com.au/Assets/kick.jpg
What's making her pose look awkward is the angle of the shoulders. Here's a tip... if the pelvis tilts one way, the shoulders will tilt the opposite way.
Stylistically, I'd make her hair and jacket flipping out more to show the action.
You can reference some other photo for wrinkles...
w00t keep it up! |
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