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AaRoNBC
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I modeled the Concept Car in Maya and put the image together in photoshop. The engine in the background is made by Ralph Frantz(i found it on Google). More resolutions can be found here: http://vir.stetson.edu/~acardena/dragoon/
lemme know your thoughts.
thx,
AaRoN
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ZippySquirrelnut
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| Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2003 12:55 am |
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mmm. nifty. a couple of things though.
1. the exposed mesh behind the bumper logo is really distracting
2. visible wheels behind the headlamps is also distracting
3.the visible front fender looks really dinged up for some reason
4.check your lights because i think the brake disk is reflecting into the interior wheelrim, which is causing that big ugly orange stripey thing
5.the windshield is difficult to read
6.the seats look a little too close to the front of the car. espcially with that GINORMOUS hood scoop,
id be interested to see this particular model from some more angles, the crits i pointed out are heavily influenced by the viewing position. for some reason the car reminds me of a bulldog, take that how you will. anyways keep up the good work.
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ZippySquirrelnut
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| Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2003 12:59 am |
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one more thing, i dunno if youve heard of
www.renderosity.com
but they do a lot of 3d posts, you might get some other usefull tips there.
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Godwin
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| Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2003 2:10 am |
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thought it looked like a chevy, had that style, and that air intake thingy is perhaps a little outrageous, and heavy maybe? like zippy said, the mesh in front is rather distracting, maybe put it behind and make the car(colours) fade off?
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AaRoNBC
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| Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2003 10:22 am |
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thanx for the feedback. i thought the wireframe mesh, "GINORMOUS" hood scoop, and chrome reflection in the wheels were cool but it's nice to get other peoples opinions. the headlights definately need some work and i don't know why i never smoothed out the front fender. I'll definitely keep these thoughts in mind on my next car. oh, you can see a 360 degree rotation of the model at the website: http://vir.stetson.edu/~acardena/dragoon/animations.html
thanx again,
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