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AndyT
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 Posted: Sat Feb 01, 2003 3:10 am |
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Hello
This looks really good for starting with. I like the purple light in the ceiling or top of the wall.  it would be cool to see some kind of bar in the opening and yeah, some plants on the wall....hehe....just brainstorming here. I don�t want to decide what you should put in the picture, but for some strange reason I looked at your picture and thought that those things would be really nice in the scene...hmmm...  ....now I am confusing myself.
I can�t wait to see this one finished.
have a nice weekend
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| Posted: Sat Feb 01, 2003 6:17 pm |
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Nice start a bit to early to do any really crits but I have one suggestion. I think the purple light from the top could use a lot of desaturation, right now the eye is forced to look at it
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| Posted: Sun Feb 02, 2003 9:25 am |
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Matthew - I want to stick to the reference image. I don't want to add anything. I think the composition works like that.
What I like about it is that the guy in the foreground is very big compared to the guys in the background and yet they look superior.
If I add anything it might just distract ...
xmmx - you think so? I guess I'll rather change the background ... make it more purple. I want the color to be vibrant. Mabybe I'd change my mind if there were more people pointing that out. It does look very smudgy though. Maybe that's what bothers you?
Btw I think the final will look look like that ...
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| Posted: Sun Feb 02, 2003 2:38 pm |
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Its looking good although its too early to be giving too much c&c. All I can say is that the purple light is kind of coming on harsh... I can't tell you how it would bounce off walls and all that but it should kinda make the whole room a little more purple or bluish but not soooo purple that it looks like there is a purple dust storm in the room. Bah I can't explain it 
Xmmx was riding that when he said it needs to be less harsh. It did draw my eye to that light (instead of the people) rather quickly at first glance. I like that picture how it is though (as far as putting anything into it). Remember it's just suggestions if I don't help at all then just skip over this one. Looks nice though, post updates
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