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Markus Schille
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This is a comission I'm working on for a magazine. It's for an ariticle about gadgets from Japan. There still some fixing/brushing up left to do, but I would like to hear your comments on it! Anyone?
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| Posted: Sat Jan 11, 2003 7:46 am |
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reminds me of balistic's work.
one comment though, the hand looks alittle large. the color is also alittle muted, maybe you can move the color away from the grey alittle? just to accent the figure. (i'm guilty of falling in love with the grey too, but sometimes too much of it flattens out the shape so you need alittle POW color.
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Markus Schille
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| Posted: Sat Jan 11, 2003 10:17 am |
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Thanks!
... You're right! The hand is to large! I need to fix that.... And I think I might try to saturate the skin colors a little bit, even though I like the grey/white a little bit to. I'm not sure what POW color means 
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| Posted: Sat Jan 11, 2003 11:28 am |
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| I like it...also agree with Jr. on the hand...also, there is alot of white space around the cool. Consider BG mayge? |
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| Posted: Sat Jan 11, 2003 6:45 pm |
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| Hello I am new to the forum. I think the piture looks good with the Aibo and everything. It is just the Dress. It doesnt look Japanese. More like Chinese. My 2 cents. Other than that I think it is looking great!!!! |
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| Posted: Sat Jan 11, 2003 8:14 pm |
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yep i'm with strife in that. it's a chinese dress - it might be too late to change it now, but a kimono/yukata would probably be better.
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Markus Schille
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| Posted: Mon Jan 13, 2003 2:19 am |
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Hmm, I see that I have made a mistake there! I guess my knowledge of chinese and japanese culture is a bit limited... 
I talked to the editor and he thought it was okay though. He really liked that dress. But I guess I need to do better research next time!
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