[Plasmodium]

hi guys,
following my last post, I finally found a host that allows me to display my images so here is the little artwork i tried to post last time.


I'm still trying to find how i can enhance it. It really needs some update..ggaaaah. Your comments and advice are most welcome.

[Matthew]

Hello, that is some cool colors, very cool.
If you want to enhance something, maybe smooth out the line art a bit, especially at her�s right stomach area.
good work

Matthew

[Al Ian]

Both the line art, and painting of the work are top notch. However, I think this could do with a more detailed background. Not something over the top, as it seems shes supposed to be standing near a wall. But maybe add some cracks in it, and some tagging or something. Based on her cloathes shes not exactly upper crust material. I think it would fit!!

Good job
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[Soak]

I would add some light to the full dark area.Or some shapes.I mean doesnt look like overmapped hair but more like a black sheet of paper

well nevermind,telling shit.

Just refine the big black

[Plasmodium]

Thanks a lot guys...well to answer a little:
Matthew: i totally agree...the line art are way too heavy. The main problem, i think, is that the heavy style of the oultine is not systematic in this work, so it doesn't add anything good.
Good point matthew.
Ai Ian: well i have to disagree. I didn't wanted to do a wall in the background. It's just suppose to be some kind of "abstract brush rush" BG. Nothing representative, but just a color. I just hate people posing in front of a flat wall. But if u thought it was so, i probably means I have to take a close look at that.
Soak: mhh..probably. But personnaly i think this dark area is the best part of this painting. It's not supposed to be realistic, but to add dynamism and some color/surface confrontation. Try to render it more natural would totaly destroy the effect i wanted to create. Which doesn't mean i succeed in it Anyway, thanks a lot everyone, i take good notes of everything you say, and i ll do my best to do something better. New artwork incoming

[SteelStorm]

I think she's HAAAAAHT!

Needs more background though, some suggestion of wind going the same direction as the hair perhaps.

How come I never meet girls like this?
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