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neff
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 Posted: Fri Dec 20, 2002 9:34 am |
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I dont like the position of the eyes, but i get tired of corrections 
Next time it will work better.
Other C&C? 
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Fri Dec 20, 2002 10:55 am |
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took me quite a while to figure out the shadows of the hairs.. they're almost too dark.
this is definitely the best image of yours Ive seen. the background and the silhouettes are pretty cool. I think the eyes are ok.. there is something about the facial structure that bugs me but i cant point out what.. maybe the chin is too small....
anyways a great image from you NeFF... good effort. |
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faB
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| Posted: Fri Dec 20, 2002 4:39 pm |
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nice work,
some problems
- the right side cheek seems to 'melt' down off the picture, while the chin appears to end at the bottom of the picture
- the nose edge seems to curve inwards, should be the other way
- there need to be a recession of the top of the nose before the forehead, between the eyebrows, especially on a male, if you draw your guy sideways it would be very obvious
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neff
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| Posted: Sat Dec 21, 2002 4:20 am |
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Thank u, next time i'll do a pre-sketch to fit those problems
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| Posted: Sat Dec 21, 2002 9:21 am |
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looks like you spent some serious tim eon this though.
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