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Ashur
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 Posted: Tue Dec 17, 2002 5:55 am |
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Here are my two meager offerings. Not as good as I'd like but pretty good compared to my own expectations. I've done as much to both as I feel I can without overdoing it, but I still feel as if there's more to do.
Any help of any kind would be more than welcome.
I used Photoshop 7 and a mouse.
*dons asbestos flame-retardant suit*
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tek9z
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| Posted: Tue Dec 17, 2002 6:57 am |
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nice smooth hairy brush u used there.
the guy's features aren't clear enough.
his eyes pop out but his nose and lips are way too flat.
paint these as big solid shapes and let the light determin what they look like, not the outline .
also a simple background color would help a lot 
too much spare time on my hands
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SikeSpiegal005
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| Posted: Tue Dec 17, 2002 7:06 am |
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I agree with tek9z except that i dont think the guy's nose is too fat. You could also give them a little more detail...unless you wanted an impressionistic look or somethin...but other than that i think these are pretty nice 
and i have a question. When i was registering, i stupidly spelt my username wrong. It should be SpikeSpiegal005, not Sike. I tried fixing it on my profile but it never works. How do i fix it?? |
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