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hamilton member
Member # Joined: 10 Jun 2001 Posts: 143 Location: minnesota
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 4:28 pm |
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Im not crazy about the backgorund... but the characters are great.  |
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n8 member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 791 Location: Sydney, NSW, Australia
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 5:58 pm |
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self portrait and a "random girl" hey hamilton?...hehe..(im so immature..)
anyway..something constructive..with the chicks hips, the weight looks as though to be on her left leg, so perhaps you could exaggerate the movement of her hip by bringing the left side of the hip up and the right side down just to give it a little more dynamics.
Just a thought, great work nevertheless. _________________ its the simple things that make a great artwork
cheers |
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gezstar member
Member # Joined: 27 Nov 2002 Posts: 224 Location: Kamakura
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 6:07 pm |
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wicked style! the only thing i can point out is that it looks a bit like you are stabbing yourself with your hand, temple of doom style.  |
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Simoom member
Member # Joined: 18 Aug 2002 Posts: 302 Location: nc, usa
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 6:16 pm |
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the line art and shading kicks ass. my only complaint is the lines get a little messy on your right foot (on the left of the photo) towards the tip |
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zhuzhu member
Member # Joined: 11 Dec 2002 Posts: 683 Location: Shanghai
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 9:54 pm |
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need some shadows for pepole? _________________ I am the king of the world! hahaha^-^ |
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