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Mon member
Member # Joined: 05 Sep 2002 Posts: 593 Location: Uppsala, Sweden
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 6:59 am |
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Hm, I think there is a story behind this one, but I'm not sure what it is. This is the second picture of the hunter. He's like a force of nature, primitive, raw and alien, but still something most of us can relate to. There is a hunter in all of us.
I might get back to it, there are still stuff I'm not quite comfortable with (like how he's holding the spear for example) but I'm starting to get protective about it and it needs to rest before it can get any better.
I hope you like it!
Cheers,
Mon _________________ www.mattiassnygg.com
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 7:38 am |
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I do.. I really do like it..
but the spear is a problem.....
I think the spear wouldnt appear quite that long if it were towards us that much.. it makes it look like the forshortening isnt quite right... maybe.. (i could be wrong tho) |
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Matthew member
Member # Joined: 05 Oct 2002 Posts: 3784 Location: I am out of here for good
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 7:41 am |
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I�m impressed with how everybody can paint cool and nice tree�s.
Do you use reference for tree�s?
Maybe the spear hand is too big?
Anyway, I think it rocks the way it is in now.
have a nice day
Matthew |
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Max member
Member # Joined: 12 Aug 2002 Posts: 3210 Location: MIND
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 8:01 am |
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I like the lightsource you have choosen |
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ChiaNi member
Member # Joined: 11 Sep 2002 Posts: 516 Location: Chicago
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 8:37 am |
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I like it. great picture. The hunter and the forest give the mood tell story. very good picture. _________________ Holly sprite |
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oDD member
Member # Joined: 07 May 2002 Posts: 1000 Location: Wroclaw Poland
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 10:09 am |
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great pic, but he has no teeth (sp? - that yellow stuff in your mouth ) _________________ portfolio | art blog |
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Inspector Lee member
Member # Joined: 28 Oct 2002 Posts: 270 Location: San Francisco, CA.
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 10:33 am |
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Very cool, your brushwork and your design of the dark areas is very reminiscent of Frazetta. There are a few problems with the spear, like awtopsy said. With the foreshortened viewpoint you've chosen, the spear should probably be shorter, the tip should be bigger, and the thickness of the shaft should vary from thick near the point to thin at the other end. Also his hands look a bit big. All in all though, vey nice. _________________ Smokey, this is not 'Nam this is bowling. There are rules. |
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Mon member
Member # Joined: 05 Sep 2002 Posts: 593 Location: Uppsala, Sweden
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Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2002 3:24 am |
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Thanks for your comments people!
Awetopsy - yeah, that might be it. I think maybe the spear draws too much attention, should probably move it around, fix the perspective and mud it down.
Matthew - No, there was no reference for this picture. Trees are cool, everybody should have a tree in their pictures =) As for the hands... Hmm.. I like them big. From a strictly naturalistic perspective you are probably right, but there is also the issue of content. The hands are important, he's a pretty physical dude, you'd expect him to have big hands because he kills stuff with them. Anyway, I felt it wouldn't be right to give him small hands.
Max Kulich - Thanks dude! It's a cold, cold light out there...
ChiaNi -
oDD - Sure there are teeth. Though I doubt if he has brushed them.
Inspector Lee - Thanks!! I'll see what I can do about the spear/arm problem.
Cheers!
/mon _________________ www.mattiassnygg.com
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