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Finer
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 11:05 am     Reply with quote
Trying to improve my workflow with more thoroughly worked out sketches
Suggestions and crits appreciated

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 6:07 pm     Reply with quote
Very nice. There's something so great about the loose feel of a good sketch. I'm really digging the top one. My only comment is on the gauntlet on his left hand. It doesn't "read" right away (looks too flat). I'd turn it a little more towards the viewer so you can see more if the elipse. On the bottom one, I'm liking the demon and the sorceress, but the guy's pose is a little static. It looks like he's in for some serious sh*t, so it seems he should be in a more dynamic pose with more tension in it. He just looks a little too relaxed.
Great stuff though. If you're doing very "finished" versions of these please post 'em.
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