[proximo]

This is just some doodle, that I took into PS anyhow just thought Id share, mostly im just sick of it right now

[Awetopsy]

ok.. a couple things bug me about this image..

first the mouth area.. is that her bottom lip? maybe it could be shaded like a lip.

second, her right (our left) arm, its hard to see where it goes.. I think its because of a lack of shading.

finally the hand near the crotch... Is she grabbing herself? if not where are her fingers etc?

sorry if this seems like a harsh crit, Im only trying to help keep at it. your doin good.