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Totally
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 Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 12:22 pm |
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Very well done.
My only crit would be on the neck.
It looks flat somehow and there is too much lilac color IMHO.
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| Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 12:25 pm |
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| yea, probly is... after 4 and a half hours (and workin on it til 4 in the morning) I just called it quits. I'm not 100% set on calling it "completed" though, and if I have the time I'll want to go back in and fix up problems like the neck (and others people will no doubt mention) |
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| Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 9:17 pm |
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| What does Randi Butterworth think? |
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Totally
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| Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 9:21 pm |
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Randi Butterworth thinks I look angry, but thinks it's a good likeness
oh.. and she commented that there's a hole in the ear
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A.Buttle
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| Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 10:51 pm |
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| You do look angry. And unkempt. Get thee a razor! |
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Totally
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| Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 10:52 pm |
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| one step ahead of ya, I shaved this morning |
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Torstein Nordstrand
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| Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 10:54 pm |
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| Nice colours. Apart from the neck business, there are some terribly sharp edges here and there, especially on the sweater, that need some tlc. |
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CyberArtist
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| Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2002 9:08 am |
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Nice, though your hair looks like it's a big spider attacking your head. (That's more a jab at your hair style than your painting style.) =)
Also, I think the neck detracts from the rest of the image. It just doesn't have the same care that the rest of the face has.
The likeness is decent, but I'd say you've made yourself look more like a hollywood star than your actual self.
BTW, Randi is right about the hole. |
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Totally
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| Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2002 9:17 am |
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all right all right I'll fix the frickin neck =P
and I'll fill in that hole in the ear
and as for the hair, I've had no time to get a hair cut for the past 2 months... and I need one... bad
In any case, no time for anything til the weekend rolls around, but when it does I'll go back in and make adjustments |
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