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gh0st
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 Posted: Wed Sep 25, 2002 11:15 pm |
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More concept than an actual painting, but what the hell..
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cptoonz
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| Posted: Thu Sep 26, 2002 5:18 am |
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| Hi. This certainly is different. What is the concept for if I may ask? Rather ghoulish, in a freaky high tech sort of way. Some specifics on anatomy, that I see, are its right shoulder, seems to be a bit too far out from the body. You may want to define the knees a bit more, as well. Compositionally speaking you may want to lengthen the pic so that she's not "cut off at the knees" so to speak. It is good work so keep it up. |
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dolf ek
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| Posted: Fri Sep 27, 2002 7:50 am |
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discusting! 
[ September 27, 2002: Message edited by: dolf ek ]
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gh0st
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| Posted: Fri Sep 27, 2002 11:58 pm |
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It is a concept for a game. An alien species if you will  |
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J. Der
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| Posted: Sun Sep 29, 2002 10:19 am |
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I think your upper body is fantastic, the shoulder and chest armor is rendered beautifully, but everything else seems to pale. Try sharpening up the metalicity on the rest of the armor, and well as sharpen the tonality of the other limbs. I would perhaps redesign the head as well, while it would be a great design to use for a zombie or dead mayan king, I don't get the feeling of an alien species. You've got all the skills needed, it's just a matter of putting them all together.
Let's see some more!
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