[Ian Jones]

Nice. I like the design, the structure that your lines suggest is quite nice (the pencil must have been a thicker one). Overall though, there are some quite confusing shapes and tones that destroy the form a bit. For me anyway, I find it hard to see much of the form where there are lots of those lines, and some of the similar dark areas. Perhaps try to lift out the highlights with a white pencil. it really needs some stronger lighting to suggest its shape. At least for a concept that needs to be a clear indicator of form, you should not use diffuse lighting.

Just for fun though, it is really nice. Hope that helps.

[Sumaleth]

Got the RamArts/Timur style going there.

[green.7]

Dome for 30 min with pencil. Just for fun.

[green.7]

2 suma: yah a little bit