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Peacekid
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 12, 2002 10:48 am     Reply with quote
Hi,

3rd drawing with Photoshop. Please help me to improve.

tks


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Godwin
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 12, 2002 10:55 am     Reply with quote
hmmm wow, first thing that struck me was the chrome, very nice

some stuff to improve could be the words ont he container, maybe set them to 'overlay'?

and the shadow i think, the middle row of wheels look wierd, i dunno exactly why, i think its the shadow

and is this mouse work or did u use a tablet?
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Peacekid
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 12, 2002 8:27 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for your help.

Yes, 100% mouse-drawn.
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 12, 2002 9:49 pm     Reply with quote


small changes: made paint more reflective in some spots. Paint tends to reflect more as its facing away from you. Tried to make the shadow areas cooler in color. The lettering on the side now doesn't look so bright.

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francmidi
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 13, 2002 2:07 am     Reply with quote
Nice colors and chrome-effects. But it seems to me, that there is a problem with the vanishing points. The wheel in the middle looks, as if it doesn't stand on the ground.

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