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Aldalorn
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 4:45 am     Reply with quote
Can you emit some critics about this work ?
Thank you.

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PS: i'm sorry to post it another time, but it was in mistake, it was in Digital Discussion.
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cheney
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 7:33 am     Reply with quote
It looks nice so far, but it really looks unfinished. I really don't like those empty areas of black.
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ZippZopp
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 8:36 am     Reply with quote
looks absolutely amazing! i love it, the sheer size of the landscape is great, keep it up!
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horstenpeter
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 8:53 am     Reply with quote
Yeah, what about the black ? The painted parts look absolutely stunning, top notch work ! If you painted the whole thing it would look - amazing.
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Cicinimo
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 9:58 am     Reply with quote
Looks REALLY astounding. But as some others mentioned, the black is just annoying. When you get that fixed up, it should be close to perfect. A little more contrast to set the details apart, with broader areas of shadow/light to retain unity would be nice.

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micke
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 12:39 pm     Reply with quote
Is there gonna be live-action in the black area? Looks good so far, just wondering if it's gonna be a matte painting.
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Infinity
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 11:18 pm     Reply with quote
wow wow wow... If you fill the rest with the same quality this would make this piece really one of the greatest
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quintessential
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 11:35 pm     Reply with quote
ep ep eeeep opop ... da tata ep ta daaaa ta eeeeep epep eppppp.

translation: looks damn good man , of course you've been told that already , so im not gonna go on about the black, i actually think in a weird kinda way the black could work

it rocks man , out of curiousity, how large is the original image?
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Aldalorn
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 14, 2002 10:40 am     Reply with quote
To answer to some questions; the final resolution is 2048*2048, and the black areas are here for compositing with 3d models.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 14, 2002 4:57 pm     Reply with quote
There are areas where im not sure what i'm looking at exactly. I bet the hardest part is making the models and the drawn areas consistant, so it would be easier to give advice if the 3d parts where there also. I would probably cut down on the color intensity in the distance. The detail is very intense. Good luck.
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