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hunter_rose0 member
Member # Joined: 15 Feb 2002 Posts: 83 Location: Chicago
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Posted: Thu Apr 11, 2002 7:48 pm |
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I'd really like to hear some feedback on these pieces. I'd especially like to hear what you don't like or think could be changed. thanks.
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TheRealT member
Member # Joined: 27 Nov 2001 Posts: 57 Location: Toronto
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Posted: Thu Apr 11, 2002 11:43 pm |
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first one is excellent, my favorite one ^_^
The exagerated skinny-ness accentuated her apparent pain.
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Cos member
Member # Joined: 05 Mar 2000 Posts: 1332 Location: UK
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Posted: Fri Apr 12, 2002 6:58 am |
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very nice work hunter! the third is definetely my favourite. You have alot of realism in your rendering style which I like, very cool.
Only thing that's letting these down imo is the proportions in some of the anatomy, e.g. top pic her left hand way too big, second pic his right leg is coming from a weird place, etc. I think if you concentrate on improving on that aspect, not worrying so much about the shading part your stuff will definetly progress in a big way. |
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Little Beefucker member
Member # Joined: 19 Nov 2001 Posts: 254 Location: US
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Posted: Fri Apr 12, 2002 7:58 pm |
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They are all well done, but I think the second one is truly phenomenal. Very gothic; he looks almost broken in his pose. Lighting is used effectively. This is not a crit, but his left arm (which I assume is bent behind his head) looks torn off at the elbow, which is fantastic. Very creepy imagery.
#1 is very sexual, IMO. She's bent out of shape, which like RealT pointed out is a nice pain accentuation.
My only problem with the series is that the first two are organic and human-focused, while the third and fourth fall on clothes design. There is less punch to them because of their distracting curls. The fourth one especially stands out, having both a character and a set. |
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Cicinimo member
Member # Joined: 03 Mar 2001 Posts: 705 Location: Seattle
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Posted: Fri Apr 12, 2002 8:02 pm |
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The first one is my favorite. The perspective is interesting, the pose is dramatic, and the painting is well done. Then again, they're all great.
I'd like to see a tighter style in some areas. For example I can't say I like the pattern on the dress on the second to last one. It just looks too quickly done.
Overall though, I love them.
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