[The Fritz]

Well,

I had some real problems posting the image here, it never showed up when I used the UBB Code, I don't know why (besides thx for trying to help me bluetraveller). But the link should work now. With it comes the original text from the first posting...

Hi there,
I'm a bit longer here at Sijun, but until now I haven't posted anything yet. Well I think it's about time to lay down the cards and show something
Something about myself: I'm teacher for art and sports in Germany at school. Besides I work as freelance Illustrator. I began with it when I was studying and I'm still keeping to it to have some options for the future and because it is fun .
About the picture: It's a concept I'm working on at the moment. It's going to be a comic about a futuresportmixture from iceskating, ultimate (frisbeegame) and rugby. A company showed some interests in the concept and would like to make a actiongame for pc. And yes, I'm a fan of the Rollerball movie (the one with Paul Newman).

Any c&c are very welcome...
http://www.angelfire.com/art2/different_view/

[ March 24, 2002: Message edited by: The Fritz ]

[bluetraveller]

The one thing that struck me was your body perspective. If taken from the angle you chose for the upper body, the left leg should be significantly shorter. Also, the hips should be parallel to the shoulders.

Nice colouring though.
Good luck

[The Fritz]

Yup,

you are right concerning the left leg. I shpuld have put it more to the right and made it shorter. For the hip shoulderrelation I wanted the upper body (torso) rotated to the side, but mayby I didn't hit it.