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kad
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 Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 8:50 am |
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Illustration I did for one of my stories. This is the Keep of Ismaren and the Misty Moor. Tell me what you guys think!
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Novacaptain
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| Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 2:42 pm |
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Hi...i have a few suggestions regarding value...and those photoshop filter clouds 
I made a paintover, i hope you don't mind - it's just easier to explain everything with a picture than with 1000 words
I'm not saying: "haha - mine is better!" I'm giving you suggestions of what i thinnk could improve your picture. Maybe my suggestion is a bit too dark...but i think the idea comes across.
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Novacaptain
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| Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 2:56 pm |
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| it just occured to me that the "keep" mountain looks very out-of place. Erosion doesn't usually "skip" a mountain, leaving it totally different from its neighbouring hills and peaks. |
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