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klaivu · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 9:36 am

Okay, maybe the title was misleading.

Anyway - c&c appreciated. Erm. I should have been working on the animal rights thing I posted a while back ..

Crits especially appreciated.

-Tepox- · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 9:41 am

HAha! Reminds me my little sister..

The puke mixes up too much with the walls, so different color selection to the puke could be better. Yellower, perhaps?

swampbug · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 9:49 am

Wow Klaivu... I like it lots !.... Reminds me of my little sister also.

DarkStalker1 · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 10:02 am

Really wicked pic !

I agree with the puke
color change suggestion and I think the bird looking in the door should have a little more expression on her face . Maybe change the position of the eyebrows to give her a more surprised or disgusted look . Excellant
work !

[666]Flat · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 10:20 am

MUAHAHAHA. Does anybody remember the "My girl friend, playing with my cock and rubbing my balls" thread or smth? Yeah it wasn't what someone could expect, exactly like in this case.

klaivu · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 10:25 am

tepox, darklighter + swambug :

flat : ... *stare* ...

klaivu · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 10:30 am

[ February 22, 2002: Message edited by: klaivu ]

[666]Flat · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 10:33 am

Never mind, it's an oldskooler thing you know. Your work is very nice indeed, just to make that clear.

palladia mors ' · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 11:06 am

hehe, seh�n kym�� siin�!!!

..and this is the stuff you painstakingly develop in your computer screen-lit wicked dark closet sweating like a pig...hehehe

statement: I like it.
next I'm going to do something as sick as this one with a bunch of bald guys in it

crits: the puke could be of different color.
plus the chick near the door looks kinda skewed, dunno why.

sCriBBler aka Jito · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 11:15 am

ROFL
true about the vomit
should be better more colored
very funny pic

Gimbal8 · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 11:25 am

LOL! Ow, man...She totally snarfed it through the nostrils. That's gotta burn. I hope she doesn't feed her babies like that after a night on the town.

I really like the angled horizon line you composed this with. I have a suggestion, don't know if it is a good one or not. Maybe the chick with the lipstick should be casting an eye over to the vomiting chick, with a raised brow.

edit: almost forgot, how about some bird seed visable in the puke?

[ February 22, 2002: Message edited by: Gimbal8 ]

Morbid Guy · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 11:37 am

Heh, heh,

very cool pic!

Socar MYLES · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 1:32 pm

Ouch! Very nice work...but...ouch! That spewage just looks painful!

I'm not sure if it's been said, because (shame on me!) I did not read the whole thread, but the room behind the door that the third figure is coming through reads more as a poster on the wall than a room--probably because the values are very similar to those of the loo wall.

Anyway...I always check out your posts...rock on, and so forth.

Ripelly · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 2:09 pm

sir, i think we have a winner.

there are some issues with the lighting (for example how the light coming from the back should be affecting the scene a bit differently), but the overall job is just great.

and yes, you figured out the story behind my nick back at teh ASDF-forums, heh.

rock.

swampbug · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 2:20 pm

About the girls face who is comming in. She doesn't need to look shocked. That would be way too predictable. ITs more of a storyesque look the way it is.

Duncan · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 6:48 pm

Well, for people who are familiar with your work, the topic wasnt too missleading.
I think this is really cool, But i agree on the vomit color and the lighting from the dance floor

Neo-MatrixX · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 7:24 pm

I like their pecker

Mr. Heiesuke Oda · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 9:19 pm

That's kool!

DiXter · Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2002 7:30 am

haha great suff Klaivu!
as always!!

ftgjcf · member Member # Joined: 13 Apr 2000 Posts: 184

mygod! i feel sorry for the sick bird

awesome work klaivu!!

Loki · Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2002 11:21 am

Hey Klaivu!

That's awesome in concept and execution. Hahahaha - made me laugh out loud when I saw it!

:::nVIDIA::: · Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2002 2:42 pm

How dearly insightful! Not that I knew diz types of gurlz in my dayz. The small stream coming out ot the nostrils....

Ed--

SplitSoul · Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 12:30 am

That is hilarious. Great job as always.

klaivu · Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 8:37 am

*hangover*

- so, sorry for the short and low-content reply.

palladia : you see right trough me.
ripelly : hah. I knew it.
loki :

everyone :

Animal characters are becoming somewhat of a routine .. I need to try out different things.

I think the damn bird is not standing on the floor, but some other level.

[ February 24, 2002: Message edited by: klaivu ]

A.Buttle · member Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724

Glad to see you took my backlighting advice.

Highfive · Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 5:27 pm

Gimbal8 - LOL, it's a waste of good baby food, isn't it? Imagine what the chicks would look like after being fed a dosage like that!

Klaivu - Two paintings in one month! Sweet1 Even with the slightly nauseating content, it looks wonderful. All their facial features and expressions are identifiable and the nightclub background beyond the door looks great for the amount of brushwork put into it.
I'd suggest putting graffiti and water-stains on the walls in the top right to keep with a similar style to the toilet.

Agree on the colour of the puke, too. You've gotta add carrots to it, for obvious reasons.

SameOldShit · Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2002 4:58 pm

I LOVE this! Are you the same person who made the pigs at Christmas and the wolf boss? Your stuff rocks! Do you have a web site?

rh0mb · Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2002 3:24 am

Gotta love these animal themed pics you keep doing. Cute chicks.

Ville