[saripol]

c&c are always welcome

[powerchild]

withe the great realsim in the face it seems you mught be cheating yourself and artwork by quickly texturing the cloth with some quick color strokes. Invest some more time down there. It just distracts me personally, but may be intended.

[Radiater]

Hey Saripol,

Face look pretty good. I like the painting in the background. Have to agree with powerchilds crit though. It's looking uneven and unfinished.

Major crit: her lower hand is on backwards. You've painted her like she has two right hands!

Keep up the good work though!

[jasonN]

Looks really great. I love the colours and the background is fantastic.
I agree with the others, you should keep working on it and get the level of finish on the clothes up to the same standard of the face. Then it'll be an even better pic!

[EviLToYLeT]

I think that it is fine the way it is...

no need to detail more, it brings focus to the face.. however, you may want to correct the shadows on her shawl - it kind of assigns a funny shape to her head.

[Robert Ashley]

You have the thumb on the wrong side of the hand on the bottom hand.

Its a nice rendering though.. good job. I just dont see how you could have paid attention to all that detail but yet put the hand on backword.

Keep up the good work!

[saripol]

thanks everyone for your c&c, i agree that the thumb is kinda hard to read.. i've tried and fixed it.. its actually her left thumb peeking out underneath her hand..
the idea behind the shading on her cloth was to bring focus to the face like EviLToYLeT
said.. not really sure if i've achieved that.. anywho here's the updated version.. i've touch up here and there.. again thanks everyone..

[kromosom]

kewllll....