Sijun Forums Forum Index
Log in to check your private messages
My Profile Search Who's Online Member List FAQ Register Login Sijun Forums Forum Index

This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.
   Sijun Forums Forum Index >> Gallery/Finished Work
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author   Topic : "Orc Guard (PENCIL)"
RampageLT
junior member


Member #
Joined: 29 Oct 2001
Posts: 46
Location: USA

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2002 2:53 pm     Reply with quote
Comments and critiques welcome...



R.

[ February 07, 2002: Message edited by: RampageLT ]
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Kari Christensen
member


Member #
Joined: 05 Jun 2001
Posts: 192
Location: Rhode Island, USA

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2002 3:16 pm     Reply with quote
Cool!- I like the hands.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
The Magic Pen
member


Member #
Joined: 05 Dec 2001
Posts: 321

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2002 3:41 pm     Reply with quote
Ddid you do that in paint chat
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
roundeye
member


Member #
Joined: 21 Mar 2001
Posts: 1059
Location: toronto

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2002 3:46 pm     Reply with quote
i think thats the first nonpaintchat thing ive seen you do(please tell me its graphite=)). thats bloody sweet man! very, very cool!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
RampageLT
junior member


Member #
Joined: 29 Oct 2001
Posts: 46
Location: USA

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2002 4:44 pm     Reply with quote
hehe yeah it is pencil...no way to do those shadows in PC.
Thanks for the reply guys..R
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
10ten
junior member


Member #
Joined: 27 Jan 2002
Posts: 46
Location: USA

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2002 4:52 pm     Reply with quote
YEAH! That drawing rocks! I love the charcoal or what ever you used. Really nice. Fits the image perfect. I also like the pose.. nice job.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail AIM Address
the_monkey
member


Member #
Joined: 20 May 2000
Posts: 688
Location: BC, Canada

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2002 5:12 pm     Reply with quote
wow, excellent drawing. everything looks perfect, except it looks like he might fall over.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website AIM Address
Highfive
member


Member #
Joined: 08 Oct 2001
Posts: 640
Location: Brisbane, AU

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2002 5:14 pm     Reply with quote
He looks more like a goblin than an orc, with a tiny frame like that. Great figure drawing and I dig his knuckles!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
EviLToYLeT
member


Member #
Joined: 09 Aug 2000
Posts: 1216
Location: CA, USA

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2002 8:10 pm     Reply with quote
....
i think the lower legs are too short

haha just messing with you... good stuff there ramp. However, I don't even think it could kill anything with that knife..
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
King Lono
junior member


Member #
Joined: 27 Dec 2001
Posts: 49
Location: Dallas

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2002 8:41 pm     Reply with quote
very nice!

i love it.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
RampageLT
junior member


Member #
Joined: 29 Oct 2001
Posts: 46
Location: USA

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2002 9:26 pm     Reply with quote
Hahaha eviltoylet...I think he uses that knife to brush his teeth or something...I really screwed up there. Oh well I'll get it right next time. I also realize that he's off balance, the should be leaning more forward. I will leave it as it is, but will keep these mistakes in mind. Thanks for the replies.

R.

[ February 07, 2002: Message edited by: RampageLT ]
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
FluffydUCK
junior member


Member #
Joined: 30 Oct 2001
Posts: 17
Location: Australia

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2002 10:20 pm     Reply with quote
wow swoit!

but dont you think that knife is a little small?
should give him a sword twice as tall as him and half a wide...
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
:::nVIDIA:::
member


Member #
Joined: 09 Nov 2001
Posts: 69
Location: Los Angeles, CA|Austin, Texas

PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2002 11:03 pm     Reply with quote
What up?...This is nice pix in the tradition of American illustration that harkens back to turn of the century. NC Wyeth, Howard Pyle (who's one of my heros)...nice shadowing as well. Ed--
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Tarandon
member


Member #
Joined: 19 Nov 2001
Posts: 152
Location: Toronto

PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2002 8:52 am     Reply with quote
His hands remind me of ninja turtles.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Hyptosis
member


Member #
Joined: 24 Jan 2002
Posts: 507

PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2002 9:18 am     Reply with quote
Those are nice hands.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Novacaptain
member


Member #
Joined: 09 Jan 2001
Posts: 906
Location: Sweden

PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2002 9:23 am     Reply with quote
Hey, that looks great. Fun to see something more or less finished from you. How does he keep the shoulderpad on...Glue maybe?

I find myself often bugging people about technical aspects of drawings...*smacks self*

Continue assim cara, desenhe sempre. Te vejo no bate-papo de desenho depois do carnaval
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
The Fritz
member


Member #
Joined: 11 Feb 2001
Posts: 80
Location: Berlin, Germany

PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2002 10:20 am     Reply with quote
Hi,

very nice drawing, u gave that figure a good depth with the shadows, just two things. The knive seems to point to far backward for the way how the Ork is clutching its fist and the upper left arm (holding the knive) is to big when the line on the right side of the hand belongs to it, looks like an upper leg.
Just something I noticed
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
hurricane
member


Member #
Joined: 25 Apr 2001
Posts: 101
Location: sweden

PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2002 4:45 am     Reply with quote
sweeet shadows rampage, u gotta gimme some tips to think of when you draw like that...cuz i looked at some drawings i did, and i get cought up in shapes more than the over-all view of the pic...maybe u dont understand a thing im trying to say....hell, i confuses my self....hehe....but any tips ?


did you add the highlights digital?(on the helmet)

sweet stuff ! like always !....
/cane
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
powerchild
junior member


Member #
Joined: 08 Feb 2002
Posts: 12
Location: Denver

PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2002 11:09 am     Reply with quote
very nice work, depth is key and you developed it well. It is a high complement to get so many complements on hands (and feet). So many artists tend to avoid dealing with them and ruin otherwise great pieces. Excellent
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
RampageLT
junior member


Member #
Joined: 29 Oct 2001
Posts: 46
Location: USA

PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2002 1:51 pm     Reply with quote
wow damn, thanks for the compliments guys. Yeah hands are a hard subject, but if you get hands and face right, it's hard to mess up a drawing too bad. Hurricane yeah I understand exactly what you're saying. In the John H. Vanderpoel (check him out) anatomy book, he says that " it is too easy for people to get caught up on the single shapes of the muscles and forget the overall look of the body". Best way to remedy this, it by doing gesture drawings..and you will see how to convey the real looking shape of a person with only the gesture and the outline.

R.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
hurricane
member


Member #
Joined: 25 Apr 2001
Posts: 101
Location: sweden

PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2002 6:09 pm     Reply with quote
rampage: yea, ok ill look him up...and i try to loosen my style up on the shape aspect of my drawings, and i get alittle further on my skills, but i guess practice is the key in this matter

thanks for the tip and dont stop drawing or ill come over and kill ya

/cane
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Display posts from previous:   
This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.    Sijun Forums Forum Index -> Gallery/Finished Work All times are GMT - 8 Hours
Page 1 of 1

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum




Powered by phpBB © 2005 phpBB Group