[FrustratedARTist]

I started this about a week ago and prob put abou 6-7 hours into it including redos and what not, but i'm just gonna leave as is so i can come back to it later in my life when i'm better...It needs some clouds

Chew it up and spit it out..

[dogfood]

I think more than clouds, it needs a focal point. My eye just wanders all over the place. There's nothing to tie the thing together or let the eye flow in an orderly fashion.

The large cave seems too large for the size of the mountain. Also, I can't put my finger on it, but the shape of the tallest three points looks unnatural.
I like the mid and foreground, however. Nice work, I certainly don't have the patience to spend that much time on landscapes (but I'm trying to get better).

[Novacaptain]

Nice. There seem to be an excessive amount os small and thin strokes.

Mountain-top snow is usually very smooth since gusts of wind are quite strong and frequent there. The snow should have a smoother texture if any at all...

Reveal some of the mountain's rocks for a contrasting detail effect

[ January 29, 2002: Message edited by: Novacaptain ]

[Briareos]

*chew* *chew* *chew* *gulp*.... oooops

i like the lighting.. feels cold... and bright, outside! woah, outside... so thats what its like!

perhaps put variety in the sizes of the different "jags" they are all similiar in size...

late

[ January 29, 2002: Message edited by: Briareos ]