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Topic : "finished acrylic cityscape and a monoprint!" |
Sonique128
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 Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 2:42 pm |
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on a 24x18 canvas:
reference image:
about a good 10-15 hours of work on this piece, and its my first realistic acrylic piece, i've dont acrylic before but never realistic. i can say that it turned out a lot better then i expected.
and my monoprint:
this monoprint is heavly diebenkorn inspired as you can see.
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Novacaptain
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 5:09 pm |
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That first painting looks good...there are some little quirky details that could use some polishing but the one major thing i think you should've noticed is the 3-point perspective that you didn't use (but is quite apparent in the photo). The first vanishing point seems to be on the far left (out of frame). The other, behind the buildings and the third is located quite far off the top of the painting.
The colors look nice. I can't really say much about the second painting... |
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 5:12 pm |
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the little details I noticed are the windows (some are a bit tilted) and the wires are a bit squirmy  |
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