[Shiro_tengu]

heres a quicky. A biker and begger character concept. tria markers and a little photoshp.

[drgn]

man i love this forum always something fsking cool too look at

[Anthony J]

hey shiro it might just be me, but the
gun in the girls hand looks odd. I mean
the fact that she has a gun, it looks odd.

maybe see what it looks like with something else in her hands. I mean cause what does she need the biker to protect her for if she has a gun ? Couldn't she get the bad guy herself ? i dunno...whatta you think ?

[Shaded]

Whoa, pedophilia?

[Shiro_tengu]

drgn - thanks man.

Anthony j - Thanks - wasn't thinking. umm... would you believe the gun is his and its empty and shes holding it for him. no? Ok I'll loose the gun. Good thinking.


shaded - what the hell is wrong with you? Don't write shit like that on my threads.

[Highfive]

Shaded - If you're going to seriously insult someone's artwork like that, at least learn how to spell first. A filthy mouth like yours needs a thorough rinse-out with Borax and a decent buffer job using a belt-sander. I'll be happy to oblige if that sounds like fun to you.

Shiro - Gotta love the look on the guy's face. It's very mean and very determined. His trenchcoat looks damn cool, too.
Not sure about the beggar girls left wrist, as it looks like it's rotated back too far. It's possible to hold your wrist in that possible, but it isn't comfortable, so I think it would be more natural if the uzi was held parallel to her hips rather than horizontal.

[Steven Stahlberg]

Shiro_tengu, excellent guy, nice tough hero type. I agree with the point about her wrist, but you already said you're loosing that gun. His pose and anatomy is basically good, just minor tweaks I'd make, like, the right boot tip could be a bit shorter/fatter. And is the girl a bit off-balance?

About Shaded's comment, maybe it's too strong, but the girl's top could be less low-cut, and personally I'd pose her hugging him a bit more to the outside of his hip, instead of the inside there, but that's just me. She also looks like she's wearing lipstick, which is ok, but I'm not sure that was your intention.

[Shiro_tengu]

Highfive - thanks for the support and for the colourful defence of my work and honour.

Steven - thankyou for your crits. I'm starting to hate the wrist!!! Yes she does look like shes toppling over backwards and towards her gunhand. and yes the boot looks funny. No it wasnt my intention to have her wearing lipstic. Also thankyou for the positional ideas on the pose. I had not looked at my drawing in that way and your thoughts there are helpful.
BTW I have been a fan of your artwork for a long time.