[dalickwid aka Magdalena R]

http://www.rpi.edu/~youngb/art/illustrations/angel01_ink.html

-Brandon

[corvax]

Hey! I like it ...

minor crits: I think the area around his left wrist is a bit large... this could be just me, but take a look. Also, he looks to me like he's gliding, and if he is, the wings should be spread more, not as vertical. Finally, I think you should give definition on the bodies of the birds (geese?), because it looks to me like they're seen from the bottom, which makes the perspective of the picture disorienting.

These are *really* minor, but might give you something to think about

Good work!

[dalickwid aka Magdalena R]

thank you! i agree with those observations...that lump on his wrist shouldn't even be there i think...but you know, there's nothing like the public humiliation of having someone notice and point out a flaw in your work to make you remember never to make that mistake again! ^_^ so thank you corvax, this bud's for you! ^^