[Liser Studios]

www.geocities.com/keith_patton_2000/menu4.jpg finished belly dancer www.geocities.com/keith_patton_2000/uglyguysketch.jpg ugly guy, 20 or so minute sketch for art class... it's only worth 5 points so i didn't really put too much into it, but i still kinda like it.
maybe i'll redraw the belly dancer dancing, with the ugly guy sitting at his table, eating his mouse, and waving a 1 dollar bill at the dancer. lol j/k
now, the important stuff. which pic do you think would be the best for the splash page of a site? I have a lot of ideas but i don't like any of them over the others.... the only one i don't like is the couple with the dark background and the sun shining on them through the clouds, i think that's kind of stupid. www.geocities.com/keith_patton_2000/sp1.jpg www.geocities.com/keith_patton_2000/sp2.jpg www.geocities.com/keith_patton_2000/sp3.jpg

[ December 01, 2001: Message edited by: Liser Studios ]

[ftgjcf]

Pretty good
The first is the best imho. Its got a nice flow with the ribbons and the hair. though it could use some more space as it seem oddly cropped.
3 first are ok really but the other are too small to make out so i have no crits there

[Highfive]

The first one is really nice and I agree with geelimp on it's best points. I'm trying to sketch a similar image myself. I think the face looks a little strange, like the back of the head is facing a different direction to the face.
In this paintover, I've brought out the left cheek and the forehead out little more, as well thicken the hair up at the top of the head. Hope this helps a little.