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Duracel
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 8:52 am     Reply with quote
Its my first lineart, hope you like it.
I know, the face is just a little bit hard to make out, but im going to color it and then you'll see it clearer.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 10:52 am     Reply with quote
I think its a nice drawing, maybe a little confusing. I think you should move the left arm more backwards so it does'nt cover so much of the body (less confusing and gives a nicer siluet)If you do this you will find that his waist is missing. It looks like the chest almost connects with his legs.

Looking forward to see it colored.

JayCeeL

[ November 19, 2001: Message edited by: jayceeL ]
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