[Peugeot]

Its not necessarily a good thing to finish a piece of art in 5 minutes. I think you should try to be more patient in your drawing, at least until you have a good knowledge/background of how to use your tools. Keep practicing how to be patient with art and it will come to you. Also, try to stay away from drawing "sick-figures." It's crucial to work out the anatomy of your models. Bottomline - spend some more time.

[ZeeroX]

Not bad, you really got the faces down, especially for being twelve. But like the other guy said, take time, eventually It will come quicker and quicker to you. It takes me about two hours before my sketch is even ready for inks! and its not even scanned yet! So be patent and let the force flow through you. heh.

[bloobyman]

I'm 12 years old and did this pic within 5 min.

-c&c, please...

[faustgfx]

[faustgfx]

why does this 12 year old have a wacom and why does he do relatively smooth lines?

hmm.

[Anthony]

You need to plan out the anatomic structure of the faces more. Think about how the face is shaped, how the different bones and muscles and tissues lay against and in each other. And draw draw draw draw. Take yer time and draw a lot. Try to spend at least an hour, hopefully more, on a picture, then post it. It's hard to give feedback on a 5 minute piece, even if it were a 5 minute piece by a professional artist.

[bloobyman]

check out "...KoRn...-colored" if you think this sucks bigass...

[A.Buttle]

You're Swedish?

I agree with Jussi. No.

[GatoNegro13]

Well, if you got rid of the messy back ground, the front man (jonathan davis I presume?) looks pretty good. Focus on him.