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pierre · Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 8:24 am

Weird things tend to happen at image compression and different gamma settings.

Pierre

GoldenBoy · Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 8:32 am

it's good. Although I can't focus in this picture. It makes my eyes wobble around. maybe it needs better focus on something interesting. Now it is only a pretty background. But what the heck i'm not here to mock on everything i see. It's a good start, but the wobbling...

EDIT: I looked again. It's great. don't mind me.. still wobbling...

[ November 04, 2001: Message edited by: GoldenBoy ]

Quasar · member Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 355

wow man that is awsome I like it!!! very imginative!!

Mr. T · Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 9:45 am

Perspective is kinda weird on the left shiny thingy

Azrael3000 · Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 10:33 am

Great Picture! But I agree with GoldenGuy!
Did you do this picture with photoshop?
greetz
Azrael3000

pierre · Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 10:42 am

yes, the perspective is a bit off, have to correct that.

Azrael3000:
yes, Photoshop

Kazz · member Member # Joined: 24 Mar 2001 Posts: 126

Hey that’s a sweet piece, I really like how you captured the cities sophistication.

My focus tends to gather around the tie-fighter cockpit thingies. Try to define them a bit more and it'll boost the over all detailed feel of this piece. Also try adding some contrast in the foreground. Check out worthless-meat-sack’s latest piece, that’s a prime example where the detail only exists at the focal point.
3 things that gather the viewers attention:
1. Saturation
2. Detail and complexity
3. Value or, Illumination

There are more but thats the 3 things I feel most effective. For a good example, again, you go back to Mr. meat sack last piece, your eyes are immediately yanked over to the red on the pirates head, then to his shoulder.

-Kazz

[ November 04, 2001: Message edited by: Kazz ]

Briareos · Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 1:58 pm

thats really cool. try focusing on a single element.

taff · member Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2001 Posts: 140

needs a focusing point. have to agree with that. great work, nice shading and lighting

Shiro_tengu · Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2001 8:08 pm

that is awesome

Psionic · Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2001 1:52 am

Its just so damn beautiful..........

LightspeedNZL · junior member Member # Joined: 09 Nov 2001 Posts: 1

Nice, the background is cool and polygony...reminds me of Another World.

Anthony · Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2001 12:08 am

Very nice job! Were the blueish illuminated areas at the bottom added afterwards or something? They seem like an afterthought :] But in any case, maybe add the same lovely detail to those areas that's in the rest of the paint?