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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2001 9:19 am |
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spent a while last night drawing this...
Its loosely based on this weeks drawing class over at Shane Glines board.
hope you all like it.... hope somebody replies (the way things have been around here lately)
C&C more than welcome.. |
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Jezebel member
Member # Joined: 02 Nov 2000 Posts: 1940 Location: Mesquite, TX, US
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Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2001 2:33 pm |
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Hey Awetopsy, you've got a nice drawing started here. I think there are a couple of anatomy issues, but they are probably easy to fix. The big thing (or should I say little? ) that jumps out at me is her nose. She's got a REALLY small pointy nose, almost Michael Jacksony, lol. It wouldn't be such a big deal if all her other features weren't so large and full. I think she would look great with a slightly larger nose. :]
When you're done I hope that you ink and color this one, she's pretty. Kinda like the old 50's movie star seductress type  |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2001 2:45 pm |
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Jez: yeah, the nose... I still am having trouble getting the noses just right. Ill have to work on that.
I really wasnt going for seductive expression.. I was kinda trying for "what you expect me to believe that?" but it ended up more sultry... ah well.. |
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Mr. T member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 2001 Posts: 516 Location: Croatia
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Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2001 2:47 pm |
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ear. |
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Cos member
Member # Joined: 05 Mar 2000 Posts: 1332 Location: UK
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Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 6:11 am |
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Well there's dodgy stuff to it but on an overall its pretty good, like her expression. If you want to to get more correct on the features n stuff you could do some runs using reference which'll help. |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Sun Nov 04, 2001 7:05 pm |
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well, hopefully Ive fixed her a bit..
Ive touched up the nose... made it bigger and less pointy
also I added some detail to the ear and fixed the hair where it meets the forehead on the left corner.
hope this works better. |
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