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Pringle · Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 8:25 am

Nice to see the forums are up and running!

I made the spaceships in Rhino and then coloured it all in photoshop.

Does anybody have some crit.?
Anything is welcome.
-ZuLu.

Ian · Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 8:38 am

nice. the background is nice. I don't like the ship. Doesn't seem to go with the rest. The chain is distracting. Keep adding details but try and balance it more.

MoleculeMan · Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 8:48 am

I think that part of it is that the lighting on the ships is very bright, but the rest of the picture has dull lighting. I like the back ground, and i like the ships, but they seem out of place kindof

Jake

Awetopsy · Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 9:45 am

i think that one ship is about to lose its one wing... flying a bit low to that rail ledge...

nice to see something out of Rhino that doesnt look like it was made in rhino... :/

I like the background. good work... I would work on more dramatic lighting tho.. ome more contrast..

Pringle · Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 9:47 am

Ok. Thanks for your comments. I agree that the ship is far to bright, and there is a lack of details. The perspective is wrong, didnt use a vanishing point.
Its always nice to get a second opinion.

Awetopsy · Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 10:09 am

here's what I mean by background dramatic lighting...

and I balanced out the pic by adding the other ship in the top right so that the chain doesnt seem so out of place..

sorry about the cheesy plain old dodge and burn effects but its the makes the point.

Shiro_tengu · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 11:04 pm

hey I really like it. I like the sence of depth as well.

welll done

Hazoc · Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2001 12:32 am

You got potential. Your sence of space is good. You just need more skills so you can improve detail and lighting.