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maceface · Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2001 9:35 am

just one of my pencils i did of an ogre please i would like some crits and comments! hope you all like it.

Lomi · Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2001 10:01 am

wow, very cool and gruesome.

I would love to see this painted, no crits from me, i cant see any mistakes

hurricane · Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2001 1:10 pm

i agree with everyone, BUT i'll put it in another way, the background is to dominant, it takes over the feeling of the ogres shape..

otherwise, kickas

.caneman

maceface · Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2001 2:48 pm

yeah im not to happy with the background...yet i think over all its an allright pic.
the anatomy wise i didnt really want to model a humans exact posture etc. but i do see what you mean. anyways i might have kingsting color it later on if he has any time.

thanx

Justa Fledgling · member Member # Joined: 23 Oct 2001 Posts: 99 Location: CA

He looks friendly enough. I like the pot smoking hippy head he's holding. Few too many H's there.
-Edit- And i love the scepter design.

[ October 29, 2001: Message edited by: Justa Fledgling ]

Alexei Samokhin · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 12:20 am

ouch ! how much details ! cool ! try to color it , this must looking much better.

KGBman · junior member Member # Joined: 28 Oct 2001 Posts: 13

his sholders don't looke quite right, but the details are excellent!

J Bradford · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 12:28 am

The arms seem to be unnaturally stuck out forward, and the background doesn't really go well. But overall a very nice image indeed.

Azrael3000 · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 12:54 am

Great Picture! Did u draw this pic with pencil(which)?
Only the background could be better.
greetz
Azrael3000

maceface · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 10:30 am

heh thanx

HellSpawn · Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2001 12:14 am

Hey Maceface,

Nice piece. I really like your character design.

Something that jumped out at me was how dark and flat the legs and boots looked in this piece. I don't think I would have noticed this so much if you didn't do such a awesome job on shading the skin and weapon.

Same goes for the dark characters you have in the background... those dark characters take away from your main focus (the orc) my eyes seem drawn to either side of the orc. I think that makes sense ;-) hehehe...

That being said... I think you have an amazing talent for details. I think you showed amazing emotion in the face of the orc. Awesome job all around maceface...

Love to see more of your work.

- Shawn

KiNgStiNg · Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2001 12:19 am

Marky Mark!@
shit get your ass on icq before I unleash the Katser on ya

Im already on it bro..(painting)....and I need to speak to you about other stuff...Like people wanting to buy posters of work we have already done together BUT....it would be wrong of me to sell them before speaking to you so yeah Mark get your ass on icq,I have alot of stuff I need to speak to you about.....and I miss mah bro

Peace
Shel

BTW....Damn nice...this is my fav work of yours.

CluelessMorgan · Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2001 4:15 am

shoot man that done in pencil! How many did you go through?

That is awesome love it! I cant really see anything wrong with it.

maceface · Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2001 9:36 am

hey shel i wont be on icq for ages man...my comp is so screwed up with its net connection its not funny.

so shoot me an email and lets sell some posters

to answer some questions:
azrael3000: i think it was a 2b lead (and to kill 2 birds with one stone) i only use a mechanical pencil! so it takes for ever yes to shade the big parts but it helps to do the small detailed parts.

shawn: thanx for the GREAT input! the background does draw your attention away from the main guy. any suggestions on ways i could make them not? like should i fade them out sort of...make them less dark?

and clueless: since its mechanical pencil i think i went through like 7 of those sticks of lead...so basically one container

thanks again for the great input