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Lukiaz member
Member # Joined: 02 Aug 2001 Posts: 242 Location: New Zealand
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the_monkey member
Member # Joined: 20 May 2000 Posts: 688 Location: BC, Canada
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2001 9:14 pm |
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man, these are some very well done sketches. i have no crits, i just wanted to tell you that im a fan. |
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burn0ut member
Member # Joined: 18 Apr 2000 Posts: 1645 Location: california
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2001 9:16 pm |
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what else can i say, except... you kickass?  |
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Matt Elder member
Member # Joined: 15 Jan 2000 Posts: 641 Location: Sydney, NSW, Australia
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2001 9:32 pm |
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Those sketches are kick arse. The shading came up very nicely but I would try to draw on paper without the lines. In general, I would be a bit concerned about proportions of sections. In the broke a nail image, the neck area is just too big for the rest of the body. Also look at the characters left bicep, it comes too far in and doesn't site correctly with the shoulder there.
As for the graveyard one, look at the characters left forearm, absolutely massive and too big for the lower arm.
Very nice though. |
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Ahcri member
Member # Joined: 23 Dec 2000 Posts: 559 Location: Victoria, B.C.
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 6:49 am |
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Pen is such a inflexible medium, and you've used it so well. Good work. |
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Lukiaz member
Member # Joined: 02 Aug 2001 Posts: 242 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 1:07 pm |
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WOOP a fan! Thank you kindly the_monkey
Haha Cheers Burnout, your stuffs kicking arse lately I might add
Thanks Matt. Yeah the whole lined paper deal...long story. Your right though.
Heh anatomy wise, they're definitley add tad distorted to say the least. As far as his neck goes it is indeed too long. I would have liked to make it bigger, more distortion the merrier.
I exagerated the forearm that much thinking that it would be an obvious intention. BIGGER next time!.
Thanks Achri. Once you get around the inflexibilities its really quite flexible.
Hey how do I make the pics show instead of appearing is links???
(I read faq me no understand good no) |
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Cos member
Member # Joined: 05 Mar 2000 Posts: 1332 Location: UK
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 1:54 pm |
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Da biggetht ganthta on da net DA LUKIAZTHT iz back!!! and he bringz dem biro sketches for yo lined paper asss!!!
Sketches iz nice.. Graveyard sketch lookin nice, (niiiceee). Tho, kinda looks more like a zombie with one arm too big for his body and a beak growing out of his shoulder standing on a guy with a egg for a head, than a graveyeard.. (maybe adding some graves, tombstones, few trees maybe, might help it look even more like a graveyard!)
second one is nice (nniiiiccee) too, espescially his neck
All in all nice work!
(nniiicccceeee)
[ October 10, 2001: Message edited by: Cos ] |
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Lukiaz member
Member # Joined: 02 Aug 2001 Posts: 242 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 4:19 pm |
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Mr Koniotis reprezent'n.
Haha...
read my replies. The arm is supposed to be big!.
Hey I got a pic for you. You still keen for collab?.
Gimme the nod and I'll tell ya more. |
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gowansy21k junior member
Member # Joined: 09 Oct 2001 Posts: 31 Location: UK, Sunderland
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 7:49 am |
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Wow! Nice artwork man! I really like Pen art, it rules. I do this sorta stuff at school, in shit lessons like R.E. on my folder etc. I really like this kinda work, have you got more? i understand that some parts of the body have exageratted features, i think it works better...
(I'm no way your standard...) |
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SuperFish junior member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 39 Location: Canada
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 8:40 am |
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Great stuff Lukia. I couldn't help but to look at your profile. You are a Tech Support?! You should be an professional artist!!!  |
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Quasar member
Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 355
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 9:21 am |
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I have to agree wih superfish based on these scetches you are deffinatly pro talent .Did you use a bic pen or something the shading is really nice . Ohh and please find another web host I am suprised no one has mentioned this but the web host you are using is just wayyyy slow and I am using a T3 connection at work so I know it's not me. |
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Lukiaz member
Member # Joined: 02 Aug 2001 Posts: 242 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2001 1:20 pm |
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gowansy21k - Thanks man. I know what you mean, I used to doodle constantly on my books and folders at school....my teachers learnt to dislike me for that...*sniff* .
Yeah distortion/exageration is cool, easier to convey certain elements with that freedom. www.geocities.com/creativ1_nz/
Thats got some old and older work(98-00).
SuperFish - Thanks but I think your pushing it there. I'm really not very versatile and really not that good. Not being modest, if you look around you'll see some *serious* talent.
Quasar- Cheers mate. Again thats too much *blush*. Yeah I use Bic. I've been waiting for someone to confirm that my host is slow!!. It is isn't it?!. SUCK!. Geocities is useless(previous host) and 'tbns' is rediculously slow.
ANYONE GOT A QUICK, RELIABLE, PIC LINKING HOST????.
[ October 11, 2001: Message edited by: Lukiaz ] |
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