[JIM]

airbrush with stained glass filters and more.

ok i tried this last time

angelfire.com/yt/jimspage1/crap/EDDD.jpg

[ October 09, 2001: Message edited by: JIM ]

[Awetopsy]

sorry, I honestly have no idea what Im looking at..

my advice tho, Sijun forumers and Photoshop Filters do not make good bedfellows.

Im not trying to sound mean by these comments, in fact Im trying to help out.

For constructive critisism I would have to say that your shapes arent clearly defined. I cant see beyond the shapes, I cant see a story behind what Im looking at. It looks like there is a "confused" emotion being portrayed but I need something for my eyes to latch onto in the picture.

I hope my crits do not offend as they are not meant to in any way. :/ I do say Id like to see this as it develops.

[JIM]

ok. just thought i would try something new.

p.s. i've seen worst pictures than these, but thanks for the reply at least someone did.

[shahar2k]

actually the irrational hate for filters comes from people just posting filters as art without putting any of their own work into it, in this case, I think that the filter was put to good use (the background is clearly the stained glass efect, but it's allso very well done)

[Keto]

i agree i think the filter use in this one is good and works very well with the picture. the face(?) looks kind of distorted i would have liked more detail with in it, the cheeck bone defintion i like the strange collors give it a nice feel and i think that it would look good if you continued the defenition of the face with the same style.