[poxen]

Yo
nice to see sijun open again, have missed it!
well, here we go.

Hard as bitch!
I am happy with it, just the legs and her right arm that bothers me. crit?

closeup

well, finally. A bw pic, a sad and tired man.


Cya

[Ian Jones]

Hi Poxen.. Your linework is pretty cool. The things that bothers me about the arms is that some areas are too chunky. left shoulder is too big compared to right. the right arms just below the elbow also looks too thick. The distance between shoulder and elbow seems to vary when comparing each arm. It should be the same.

You dont need to put a line around the top of the breasts. It makes them look like implants, and makes them look really round. Also they look a little lumpy in some places.

Hope that helps.

P.S. Check out Micke's new tutorials...

[Ian Jones]

Oh I forgot.

The man is cool too. The face and hair looks really full of character.

[poxen]

Ian Jones- Thx! My skills on coloring are not the best, =). Have problems with putting up the layers and so on. And the shoulder thing, gaa, why didn�t i notice!
She has implants! hehe, yea its a bit wierd.
Oh micke has a new tutorials, wil check it out!
Thx for your help!
cya