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Topic : "First finished digital painting - Crits please :)" |
DreamLight junior member
Member # Joined: 30 Jul 2001 Posts: 2 Location: Groningen, Netherlands
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 7:34 am |
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Heya people, if been lurking on this board for a long time and now i finally have something to contribute. I just got my wacom a couple of weeks ago and have been practising a lot. I've found out that its very helpful to try to reproduce a corbis photo you like every day. Just work on it for a few hours... learn.. and leave it. And the next day start all over again. This is the result of such an attempt. Tell me what you guys think... I wanna get better at this...
[ July 30, 2001: Message edited by: DreamLight ] |
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DreamLight junior member
Member # Joined: 30 Jul 2001 Posts: 2 Location: Groningen, Netherlands
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 7:52 am |
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Okay i can't get this f^&king pic to load.. i know there are some problems with links to geocities pics... can anyone help me out? |
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CyberLink member
Member # Joined: 10 Oct 2000 Posts: 213 Location: Mainz, Germany
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 8:52 am |
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That one definitely seems to be quite nice. |
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tone junior member
Member # Joined: 16 Jul 2001 Posts: 32 Location: Madison, WI
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 9:02 am |
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I really like it. Very tight. |
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Blade member
Member # Joined: 23 Nov 2000 Posts: 85
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 1:33 pm |
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Hey very nice, I wish i could give you some crit but I suck at digital art and couldnt tell you what is wrong in that perspective but I am studying color theory on my own right now and you seem to be doing just fine.
I am a lurker too, I just dont post any pics because I suck, havent been drawing lately which i should heh gotta get somethin done for a friend. Anyway maybe once I start to pick up a little better again ill post.
Anyhow great pick I love it, keep up the great work  |
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Laemtao member
Member # Joined: 15 Jun 2001 Posts: 129 Location: KayEl, Malaysia
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 1:38 pm |
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I love the Clouds.. nice moody piece. You're doing great! Keep this up and you'll be doing matte paintings for movies hahaha. Erm. that is a nice goal wouldnt it?
good luck
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mo |
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simuartist member
Member # Joined: 22 Jul 2001 Posts: 57 Location: St. Charles Missouri
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 2:21 pm |
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Over all I think i looks great especially the background stuff!!! |
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hwei member
Member # Joined: 07 Jun 2001 Posts: 51 Location: Malaysia
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 10:21 pm |
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the background is gorgeous. you might like to try a little more detail, light / shade on the stonework of the church, the colours of the church are a little flat as they are now. try making the stone look rough. I don't know how. er, mess around a bit on a separate layer with different shades of the base colour and smudge them? the bells are great though, I like the ropes and bits, it makes them look very authentic. |
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KleptomaN junior member
Member # Joined: 27 Jul 2001 Posts: 27 Location: BS
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 11:37 pm |
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quote: Originally posted by DreamLight:
Okay i can't get this f^&king pic to load.. i know there are some problems with links to geocities pics... can anyone help me out?
1. Rename the image file's extention to .TXT
2. Link to the picture like this: http://geocities.com/yoursite/yourpic.txt (use img tags instead of url)
You could also try finding another host. (yod.net is great)
[ July 30, 2001: Message edited by: KleptomaN ] |
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