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dr . bang
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Location: Den Haag, Holland
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 Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 7:13 pm |
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ugh, here's another one, i spent alot of time with this, please critique, thanks 
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exo13
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| Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 7:36 pm |
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| Good Painting. The hair and overall feel in terms of lighting and shadow look good. You should probably work on your anatomy though. The eyes seem a little small and the shoulder seems a little too close to the head. And the sweater seems to be lacking in texture. Other than that, it's great. Did you use a refference? |
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Frosted Flame
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| Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 7:39 pm |
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First lemme say that it's a big improvement from you previous attempts. I like that you are really trying to show the different planes of the head and face.
Her head seems to be turned in a rather impossible position. She kinda looks like she's from The Exorcist. Her ear is a little bit too big I think, and she is missing her eyelashes Overall like I said above, it's a big improvement. I look forward to seeing your next piece!
PS - you should really fix the typo in your location in your profile |
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