[DRAGooN of deranged]

a friend of me makes a trading card game in the style of m:tg.. well, he asked me if i'd like to draw the card deck..
the first 2 cards are finished (at least i hope so)
the cards are 210x300px in the game, i painted them in 700x1000px

goblin of the flame (kobold der flamme, since it is a german game ^^)


rootworm (wurzelwurm)


c&c please

[Akolyte]

I think you need to harden the edges and define or finish some aspects of the pics, such as the flame in the goblin pic. Some areas don't seem finished. Cool ideas though, just need to shine 'em up some more.

[Collosimo]

Yeah, spend a little bit more time on them.. just polishing things you think need it.

I really like the goblins mouth.. great work there. The first problem I think I have found is to do with the lighting.. it is defintely confusing... because of the complexity of the light sources.. you have actually handeled it quite well, but there is something that bugs me about it.

The six pack has a 'box' around it... lose that because it makes it look like and ice pack or a box of chocolates.. or EGGS.. thats it.

The second one, the teeth aren't really all that good looking.. the character design is a bit boring because of the teeth. Hey dont ask me what you could do about that.. it is difficult to say. You need to shift the hole, and blackness of the digestive tract dissapearing. It should be higher, as if it were following the form of the worm. At the moment it just dissapears directly away from the viewer.. this isn't correct.

Anyway.. hope that was helpful. Have fun doing all those cards. It will teach you a lot. Your friend should be glad your on the job.

[DRAGooN of deranged]

thanks for the comments.. i think they helped me.. i took a short break to modify the worms mouth:



i think i will add some details to the cards later, when i got better in that "roughish" painting