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filrobb
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Location: Irvine, CA

PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:06 am     Reply with quote
I posted this on the concept art forum, and I'm fairly pleased with the results so I figured I'd post it here too. See what you all think. Done with Photoshop and Painter.

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Blitz
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Location: Sedro-Woolley, WA

PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:37 am     Reply with quote
GOOD to see you here too Filrob....Im a big fan of your stuff.....Big fan.

I like this pic alot...colors are nice...I feel all warm and good now.
hehe

You have great stuff....

Seeyas around

Blitz
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Collosimo
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Joined: 30 Dec 2000
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Location: Brisbane, QLD, Australia

PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:40 am     Reply with quote
Very Very nice. This is a really great painting. You should be pleased with it!

Great character, great atmosphere, great colours, great rendering, great idea!

First post... well welcome to the forum. It's great to see yet another talented artist here.

Your website is good. So everyone visit his website, it has a large gallery of his works, and they are all good. Well worth the IE bookmark space!

Crit: I think that the shadow of him on the ground should be darker as it gets closer to his feet. The most noticeable thing that I first saw was the wall, the stone wall. I think the problem with it is that it doesn't look solid. This could be the rendering proccess you used. When I see it I can see lots of tranparent brush marks.. and areas of paint layed down that because of their transparency and blurriness, consequently look transparent and not solid.

Add some sort of texture.. some grit, to sharpen it up..

Other than that I dont have anything else to say. Good work..
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denizen
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 1:00 am     Reply with quote
really stunning coloring!! I also visited your web site. Can't belive you are the one who made the art of Nox!! ^__^

nice work. Hope to see posted also your 3d models sometime

bye

denizen
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ime
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 2:20 am     Reply with quote
welcome...
nice work
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filrobb
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Location: Irvine, CA

PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 6:54 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for the compliments guys. Wow! There are a lot of people who post on this board. These forums are great for inspiration and giving me the initiative to stop playing computer games and do art.
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Dthind
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 7:20 pm     Reply with quote
Very interesting. I like it. Welcome
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Morbid Guy
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 9:10 pm     Reply with quote
This looks really nice, I love the expression on the guys, looks great. Welcome to the forum.
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Jucas
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Location: Pasadena, CA

PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 9:42 pm     Reply with quote
Hey! How's it going! I hope this message board can provide you with at least some critiques and inspiration. Well the whole image is great, if I had to make an type of crit (and I am really streching here) I would've done two things differently from your render;

1- I would've made him staring down and directly at us, just seems that a small hunch back would be more timid and wouldn't give the evil eye
2- I would've made his fingers streched all the way out and partially on the door handle, as if he was about to open the door.

Anyways GJ! And like I said those crits are streching and are more personal prefrence than anything else.

I hope to get some crits from you and see more of you artwork, btw your site rocks!

enough outta me, If I don't stop now I could go all night....

-jono
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Wyatt Turner
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 3:27 pm     Reply with quote
welcome to the forum!
I like your style, the use of the yellow and blue lighting is a cool effect. keep them coming

I'm off to check your site out now

this is a good place once you get past a few of the Dorks.
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DiXter
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 3:32 pm     Reply with quote
Hey.. thats very nice..
I love the blueish shadows.
Keep it up!!
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Akolyte
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 5:47 pm     Reply with quote
Yes, welcome. You have some really cool stuff at your site.
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