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Noctali
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 5:57 am     Reply with quote
Crits.....
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 3:14 pm     Reply with quote
Looks good! As for critique, the shading seems pretty weak, more hatching on the darker areas would go a long way to enhance this one. Also, her right breast (our left) doesn't seems to have any shape, you may want to define that a little better
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