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schabe member
Member # Joined: 17 Feb 2001 Posts: 327 Location: hamburg, germany
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:47 pm |
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very nice picture.
awefull coloring - except the shadow on the dress looks quite weird too me. (too sharp ?) |
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DiXter member
Member # Joined: 17 Mar 2001 Posts: 622 Location: sweden
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 1:18 pm |
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very nice one indeed!!
Schabe: ??? awfull colors you say?? I think they a pretty cool. |
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Cos member
Member # Joined: 05 Mar 2000 Posts: 1332 Location: UK
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 2:12 pm |
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hey this is sweet sear, I like the style, very photographic and stylised. I noticed a few things that looked abit strange, had a quick attempt at altering them, Namely the nose and some shading on her head, face, shoulder. Not sure if you will prefer it. Anyway great stuff =)
[ June 12, 2001: Message edited by: Cos ] |
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burn0ut member
Member # Joined: 18 Apr 2000 Posts: 1645 Location: california
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 2:49 pm |
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real nice sear, but i really like what cos did!!
her jaw line was way to harsh |
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sear member
Member # Joined: 29 Sep 2000 Posts: 443 Location: switzerland
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 3:19 pm |
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hi everyone and thanks for the feedback.
kaiju: oh thank you!
toast: thanks!
boomstick: thanks. don't forget to email me man
olve: glad you like it my old mate.
schabe: well, i'm sorry you don't like my colors (in my humble opinion i don't find them too awful, but again, who i am to say that).
dixter: thanks guy.
cos: hey! thanks for doing the quick repaint. of course you're right, i must study more my basics... thanks again! (if i fix it, be sure i'll let you know)
burnout: thank you. and you're right, cos is the man!
later all. |
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schabe member
Member # Joined: 17 Feb 2001 Posts: 327 Location: hamburg, germany
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 3:28 pm |
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i meant 'awefull' in a good way (except the sharp shadow on clothing). is this possible ? lets lookup a dictionary (not my mother tongue)  |
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Cos member
Member # Joined: 05 Mar 2000 Posts: 1332 Location: UK
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 3:33 pm |
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sear - happy to help guy =)) Some after thoughts I noticed, I'll mention incase they help too. I think probably I shoulda made that shadow from her even nose stronger, and possibly the lighting on her forehead is very centred, maybe you could add some more to the left =)
also it's your pic, so really you the man! =) |
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gLitterbug member
Member # Joined: 13 Feb 2001 Posts: 1340 Location: Austria
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 3:43 pm |
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I�m sure schabe meant "awesome", because thats what it is.
Sowas kann jedem mal passieren
You�ve done a great job sear, she�s very beautiful and I really love her facial expression. |
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Frosted Flame member
Member # Joined: 01 Jun 2001 Posts: 232 Location: Ontario
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 4:26 pm |
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Wow, this is beautiful to say the least. It reminds me a lot of Janne's work. I love the colours, and the agressive brush strokes. Great stuff! |
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schabe member
Member # Joined: 17 Feb 2001 Posts: 327 Location: hamburg, germany
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 5:25 pm |
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yeah 'awesome' is, what i meant. thanks, gLitterbug, i'll keep that in mind now  |
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Frost member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 2662 Location: Montr�al, Canada
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 5:35 pm |
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sear: ...hmmm... "all ripe" enh? =] Moi aussi, voir meme pourri. |
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SuperFish junior member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 39 Location: Canada
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 8:15 pm |
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Great stuff. Love the way you break down the faces. Oh, yeh the colors, too. |
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sear member
Member # Joined: 29 Sep 2000 Posts: 443 Location: switzerland
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:25 pm |
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...and she's all ripe!
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Kaiju member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 114 Location: Somewhere
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:28 pm |
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That is great. The tones are beautiful. Has a real nice sunny day feel to it. I like how you didn't use extreme darks for the shadows. |
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toast! member
Member # Joined: 29 Sep 2000 Posts: 442 Location: France
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:35 pm |
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very nice sear , i really like this one |
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BooMSticK member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2000 Posts: 927 Location: Copenhagen, Denmark
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:43 pm |
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Yeah, I'm with the others - very nice, sear. I'll send you that mail asap....
,Boom |
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Olve member
Member # Joined: 23 Feb 2001 Posts: 168 Location: Norway
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:45 pm |
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Stunning pic Sear! Love the red in the picture. And the rest of course as well....!
Olve |
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sear member
Member # Joined: 29 Sep 2000 Posts: 443 Location: switzerland
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 12:29 am |
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schabe: all right! no worries
cos: thanks again for the comments. i'll keep'em in my mind and show you the possible result (i'm a lazy bum, y'know? )
glitterbug: thanks for both comment and explanation about the word. danke!
frosted flame: janne is my hero thanks for the comparaison (janne liked the pic as well, so i'm really happy)
frost: aahahha! tu es fou hhhhaaa!
superfish: thank you guy.
thanks y'all again for both comment and help. that's the only i can improve to paint something decent. |
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agent44 member
Member # Joined: 07 Sep 2000 Posts: 473 Location: glendale, CA
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 8:18 am |
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this is one of your best to date. Colors, design, rendering, facial planes, all superb. |
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ex member
Member # Joined: 23 Mar 2000 Posts: 887 Location: USA
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 11:41 pm |
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I think he meant awefull as "full of awe". Sear! I told you I would look. It's neat, I agree with everone, nice colors and whatever, but the dress is so flat. It looks ugly to me. I'm always the one who has to be different. Just my opinion. Toooo flat. Nice though, bravo.
PS - I love the eyes. |
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