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schabe
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 12:47 pm     Reply with quote
very nice picture.
awefull coloring - except the shadow on the dress looks quite weird too me. (too sharp ?)
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 1:18 pm     Reply with quote
very nice one indeed!!
Schabe: ??? awfull colors you say?? I think they a pretty cool.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 2:12 pm     Reply with quote
hey this is sweet sear, I like the style, very photographic and stylised. I noticed a few things that looked abit strange, had a quick attempt at altering them, Namely the nose and some shading on her head, face, shoulder. Not sure if you will prefer it. Anyway great stuff =)



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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 2:49 pm     Reply with quote
real nice sear, but i really like what cos did!!
her jaw line was way to harsh
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 3:19 pm     Reply with quote
hi everyone and thanks for the feedback.
kaiju: oh thank you!
toast: thanks!
boomstick: thanks. don't forget to email me man
olve: glad you like it my old mate.
schabe: well, i'm sorry you don't like my colors (in my humble opinion i don't find them too awful, but again, who i am to say that).
dixter: thanks guy.
cos: hey! thanks for doing the quick repaint. of course you're right, i must study more my basics... thanks again! (if i fix it, be sure i'll let you know)
burnout: thank you. and you're right, cos is the man!

later all.
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schabe
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 3:28 pm     Reply with quote
i meant 'awefull' in a good way (except the sharp shadow on clothing). is this possible ? lets lookup a dictionary (not my mother tongue)
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 3:33 pm     Reply with quote
sear - happy to help guy =)) Some after thoughts I noticed, I'll mention incase they help too. I think probably I shoulda made that shadow from her even nose stronger, and possibly the lighting on her forehead is very centred, maybe you could add some more to the left =)

also it's your pic, so really you the man! =)
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 3:43 pm     Reply with quote
I�m sure schabe meant "awesome", because thats what it is.
Sowas kann jedem mal passieren

You�ve done a great job sear, she�s very beautiful and I really love her facial expression.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 4:26 pm     Reply with quote
Wow, this is beautiful to say the least. It reminds me a lot of Janne's work. I love the colours, and the agressive brush strokes. Great stuff!
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schabe
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 5:25 pm     Reply with quote
yeah 'awesome' is, what i meant. thanks, gLitterbug, i'll keep that in mind now
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 5:35 pm     Reply with quote
sear: ...hmmm... "all ripe" enh? =] Moi aussi, voir meme pourri.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 8:15 pm     Reply with quote
Great stuff. Love the way you break down the faces. Oh, yeh the colors, too.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:25 pm     Reply with quote
...and she's all ripe!
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Kaiju
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:28 pm     Reply with quote
That is great. The tones are beautiful. Has a real nice sunny day feel to it. I like how you didn't use extreme darks for the shadows.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:35 pm     Reply with quote
very nice sear , i really like this one
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:43 pm     Reply with quote
Yeah, I'm with the others - very nice, sear. I'll send you that mail asap....
,Boom
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 11:45 pm     Reply with quote
Stunning pic Sear! Love the red in the picture. And the rest of course as well....!

Olve
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 12:29 am     Reply with quote
schabe: all right! no worries
cos: thanks again for the comments. i'll keep'em in my mind and show you the possible result (i'm a lazy bum, y'know? )
glitterbug: thanks for both comment and explanation about the word. danke!
frosted flame: janne is my hero thanks for the comparaison (janne liked the pic as well, so i'm really happy)
frost: aahahha! tu es fou hhhhaaa!
superfish: thank you guy.

thanks y'all again for both comment and help. that's the only i can improve to paint something decent.
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 8:18 am     Reply with quote
this is one of your best to date. Colors, design, rendering, facial planes, all superb.
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 11:41 pm     Reply with quote
I think he meant awefull as "full of awe". Sear! I told you I would look. It's neat, I agree with everone, nice colors and whatever, but the dress is so flat. It looks ugly to me. I'm always the one who has to be different. Just my opinion. Toooo flat. Nice though, bravo.

PS - I love the eyes.
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