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wayfinder member
Member # Joined: 03 Jan 2001 Posts: 486 Location: Berlin, Germany
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 6:01 am |
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hey, here's some caricatures i drew. these are people from my 2d techniques course.
any crits/comments? i know it's hard to tell how true they are when you dont know the person in real life, but what could i improve on them anyways?
[edit: linkfixing]
[edit2: these are 5-15 minute sketches]
[ May 11, 2001: Message edited by: some guy in a clown costume ]
[ May 11, 2001: Message edited by: wayfinder ] |
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wayfinder member
Member # Joined: 03 Jan 2001 Posts: 486 Location: Berlin, Germany
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 8:49 am |
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i just colored one of them... but something's wrong with the chin.. i don't really want it to be enyala-smooth, but THIS is not right.. sigh...
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faustgfx member
Member # Joined: 15 Mar 2000 Posts: 4833 Location: unfortunately, very near you.
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 9:23 am |
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thumbs up. i can't do that stuff. |
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Wyatt Turner member
Member # Joined: 18 Oct 2000 Posts: 501 Location: Everett, WA, USA
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 9:42 am |
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Great stuff. That big eared dude reminds me of that guy on the Heavy metal cartoon. Stern you no good.... yada yada yada.. |
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Sumaleth Administrator
Member # Joined: 30 Oct 1999 Posts: 2898 Location: Australia
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shahar2k member
Member # Joined: 01 Jun 2000 Posts: 867 Location: Oak Park CA USA
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 6:33 pm |
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hehe sumaleth I was gonna write "you know, that looks a lot like levelord!" but then I scrolled down
and wayfinder, the problem you're having with the chin is because it fades into the background's color, try changing the background to a lighter neutral color, see if that helps you, otherwise it looks fine |
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wayfinder member
Member # Joined: 03 Jan 2001 Posts: 486 Location: Berlin, Germany
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2001 7:22 am |
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faustgfx, thanks!
wyatt, thanks! never seen that cartoon though
sumaleth, that's a great rendering, but you are very close to his real face, aren't you.. looks a bit like one of these superdeformed manga characters, just older
anyway, i like it a lot.
shahar2k, actually i think this fading into the background thing is what saves the chin from being a total failure i think i might play around with more skin tones to make it look less like a puppet. |
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wayfinder member
Member # Joined: 03 Jan 2001 Posts: 486 Location: Berlin, Germany
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2001 12:08 pm |
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spent some more time on him, skin tones mainly, and a (crappy) second light source
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Morbid Guy member
Member # Joined: 19 Oct 2000 Posts: 277 Location: England
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2001 12:48 pm |
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I really like the first sketch , it has a dark kinda look that floats my boat, heh, heh. Nice style, keep it up mate. |
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Collosimo member
Member # Joined: 30 Dec 2000 Posts: 551 Location: Brisbane, QLD, Australia
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2001 12:40 am |
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before I say how great this is, may I mention........ please dont name your pics 'untitled' arrrrrgh! whenever I save a pic, and it says untitled, it is frrigin annoying.. anyway..
Nice charicatures... prety fun when you do your whole class.. make a collage of them, and then present it to the teacher. |
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