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Swami
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 Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2001 4:58 am |
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Hi all peoples 
I'm new here +\-
[i'm not write on the forums because of peoples thet unloving spelling mistakes  ]
and now for the paint
i post my first Oil paint
my teacher is my daddy.
i want to know if i on the the right way ?
i know one of the eye is not good [the color
tube is empty and because of thes i knot Finished thes work]
and the mouth is not really in the right angle. [in image 4 you can see it clearlee]
and Ooo the Text is Hebrew sorry
[ April 28, 2001: Message edited by: Swami ] |
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shahar2k
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Location: Oak Park CA USA
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| Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2001 1:20 pm |
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yah text says "steps for creating my first oil painting"
can't help you much, I've never done an oil painting myself.... or any painting other than water color, .... |
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Keto
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Location: Agoura, CA
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| Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2001 9:28 pm |
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| i really like this piece up to the 4th one, i spent some time analyzing why i liked it better and i think that the harsh shadowing gives it a stronger more emotional look, i think the 5th one looks a bit to washed out. hey what do i know, but i think darkening the shadows of the face would make it look better. |
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