[JickyJak]

Feel a little uncomfortable posting in this forum seeing as there is such a high concentration of pros and talent( where better to get a good C&C).

Pretty new at this Coloring thing-I could really use some tips here.

Original Line Art: Bomu/Organic Metal
Design/Colors: JickyJak/Steeldophin.com


Thanks in advance.......

[dr . bang]

Everything is good except her face

[CapnPyro]

i'd agree, looks great cept her face. also, you made her lower back shorts colored where it should be skin

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[JickyJak]

Okay I assume the face needs more depth? I add a few more lows and highs.

The part of her back, that is colored like her shorts looked to me like a waistband by the way the bottom of the shirt behaves, anyway it is still a good point, so I quickly made the change....



[This message has been edited by JickyJak (edited April 13, 2001).]

[sacrelicious]

JickyJak, your coloring here is very nice. I think the face looked better before, it was cleaner and much less muddled. Besides, I think their problem with the face has to do with the lineart, not the color. One thing I did notice, though, was the area directly under her jaw and between her hair. You have ig dark blue, as if it WAS the hair, but I think it would probably be her neck and thus should be a dark flesh tone. Other than that, everything looks pretty nice!

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