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phob junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Feb 2001 Posts: 13
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2001 11:45 am |
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hi, I posted something here, but didn't get many feedback, I'm still new to digital painting, so..
this is my last picture, comments pls
I did this alien too, it's not colored, so if anyone want to do it, go ahead http://orbita.starmedia.com/~phobsart/alien.jpg
thank you
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Dthind member
Member # Joined: 12 Dec 2000 Posts: 436
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2001 8:59 pm |
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Crit:
The mouth is a bit low (compared to the nose)
The face appears swollen
The overall face appears more man-like compared to the obviously female body
Even with the shading the right boob (its left) appears disporportionate to the left (its right)
There is cool potential for drama with the shadows |
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goofball junior member
Member # Joined: 21 Jan 2001 Posts: 29 Location: Zuid-holland
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2001 12:51 am |
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well like it, but i think u should just keep practicing... but ur going the right way  |
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travis travis member
Member # Joined: 26 Jan 2001 Posts: 437 Location: CT, USA
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2001 7:21 am |
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Well the airbrush can be a tough tool to master, you might want to start with the paintbrush
if you want to do realism you have to learn to build up to it, what the components are, so if you could draw it would be like drawing on the computer |
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