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phob
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2001 11:45 am     Reply with quote
hi, I posted something here, but didn't get many feedback, I'm still new to digital painting, so..
this is my last picture, comments pls


I did this alien too, it's not colored, so if anyone want to do it, go ahead http://orbita.starmedia.com/~phobsart/alien.jpg

thank you
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Dthind
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2001 8:59 pm     Reply with quote
Crit:

The mouth is a bit low (compared to the nose)
The face appears swollen
The overall face appears more man-like compared to the obviously female body
Even with the shading the right boob (its left) appears disporportionate to the left (its right)
There is cool potential for drama with the shadows
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goofball
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2001 12:51 am     Reply with quote
well like it, but i think u should just keep practicing... but ur going the right way
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travis travis
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2001 7:21 am     Reply with quote
Well the airbrush can be a tough tool to master, you might want to start with the paintbrush

if you want to do realism you have to learn to build up to it, what the components are, so if you could draw it would be like drawing on the computer
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