[Akolyte]

My little take on Magneto...penciled, inked, and colored by me. Please tear it apart. Thanks. The coloring is a bit flat, I worked more on the drawing itself, so please CRIT that.



[This message has been edited by Akolyte (edited February 14, 2001).]

[Akolyte]

Damn jpeg compression...grrr...

[DarkGarden]

I like the vibrant colours, and the pose you were going for has some dynamic power to it, that's great

The anatomy needs some work, especially around the knee and quadriceps area of his thigh. I always suggest that people who want to draw comics find a copy of Burne Hogarth's Dynamic Figure Drawing. It's a great book that goes a long way to help with anatomical studies (especially when people don't have musclebound references around).

His hand on the right side (his left) is a little small considering the perspective, and the size of the bicep (as well as how it's sort of part of the shoulder in your drawing) is out of whack as well. Big can be good, but it needs to work with everything around it.

The only unfinished part in comparison to the rest seems to be his face. Maybe some more linework, and defining the shadows a bit better.

Other than that, I think it's a great start, and I love the motion of the capework.

Peter



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[DarkGarden]

Oh..one thing....the Super Mutant Jockstrap looks a bit painful.


heh

[topeira]

a few things -
1) try loosing up the posture. a more bent right leg could made a difference.
2)investigate more the muscles anatomy for better description of the body. basically it's good but the thighs need work and the oblique abs too.
3)the coloring is good. Could use more shading on the face tho.

Keep posting, man.



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[Psionic]

I like the pic, good work m8, one thing I'm not sure about is the colour of the energy around his fist, could maybe do with some glow?

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